The grade I was given for this design was a C and the mark 13/20, which I am hoping I can improve to a B and maybe an A with my final design so it doesn't lower my overall grade.
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| First draft of final design |
+ Easy and clear to navigate
+ Understand conventions well
+ Subscription box is a particularly attractive feature
- Competition again needs a more specific prize
- Some articles again need more specific focus
- More variety of models need to be used in images
From this feedback I have realised that the aspect which needs most improvement is the images as I have used the same models repeatedly, but tried to dress them differently and portray them as separate artists. However one of the criteria is to shoot a variety of appropriate material therefore I had to use some other images with different models to ensure this variety is clear and make the magazine look as non-repetitive and realistic as possible. As with my other final products another major problem with this design was the accuracy of language and register as where I had listed the sell lines in my contents list such as 'Competition Time' and 'Festival Update' I had used the same wording so I changed the wording here and added more detail about the articles as they were too general.
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| Final design of contents page |
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