Double Page Spread
The grade I was given for this design was an A and the mark 16/20, which I am very happy with but can hopefully get a few more marks with the secure this grade.
+ Conventions are understood well
+ Utilised specific features well
+ Main image is appropriate
- Some minor tweaks needed in article
- Final paragraph should be in bold for emphasis
From this feedback I have realised that the aspect which needs most improvement is the accuracy of language and register, as there are a couple of minor errors in terms of language used in my main copy of the article which need altering to improve my mark slightly. For example I was advised to rephrase the direct quote "I'm so glad you like it" into "I'm delighted it's a success" as this sounds more like the language which would be used in a real article. I also took the advice to put my final paragraph in bold as it contains a lot of important information and conventionally double page spread articles do this, it has added a bit of variety to the look of it and emphasised this section so if a reader only wants to read in the important information, along with the flash in the centre, their eyes will be drawn straight to this section.
+ Conventions are understood well
+ Utilised specific features well
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| First draft of final design |
- Some minor tweaks needed in article
- Final paragraph should be in bold for emphasis
From this feedback I have realised that the aspect which needs most improvement is the accuracy of language and register, as there are a couple of minor errors in terms of language used in my main copy of the article which need altering to improve my mark slightly. For example I was advised to rephrase the direct quote "I'm so glad you like it" into "I'm delighted it's a success" as this sounds more like the language which would be used in a real article. I also took the advice to put my final paragraph in bold as it contains a lot of important information and conventionally double page spread articles do this, it has added a bit of variety to the look of it and emphasised this section so if a reader only wants to read in the important information, along with the flash in the centre, their eyes will be drawn straight to this section.
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| Final design of double page spread |
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